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"Black Diamond"
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<p>Lost in the winds of change, </p>
<p>unable to agree and bend into</p>
<p>the days now bitter strange....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Her eyes swollen from the</p>
<p>tears cried and the many nights</p>
<p>of no sleep....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Repeatedly in her thoughts this</p>
<p>pain still creeps....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>The pain of the untrue confession, </p>
<p>devastating episodes of another life lesson....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Weakened from the many long</p>
<p>hours of empty searches....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Torn apart by the ravaging clues....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Painful memories of desires </p>
<p>somewhat chasten but long </p>
<p>over due......</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Clouded in doubt, she attempts </p>
<p>to hold on and see things through </p>
<p>to the end.....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>But the many hurts hide even the caring concern of a friend.....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Misery clouds her once clear </p>
<p>view....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Misty were the eyes consumed </p>
<p>with thoughts of a past that never grew.....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Her soul evolving once again from</p>
<p>the sulken depths of the darkest burrow of nothingness....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Then one day the black void of her soul was touched ever so gently</p>
<p>by a ray of light......</p>
<p> </p>
<p>This glimmer of light transforms </p>
<p>the once coldest soul......</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Slowly her sides becomed chiseled</p>
<p>from the lessons, yet the marvelous</p>
<p>light does not flicker away....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Instead this light warms her iced edges, and is sweetly absorbed within her spirit....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Now her soul once blackened</p>
<p>from the many pains of lost </p>
<p>love, grants her the peace of a</p>
<p>new sparkle and shine.....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Growing and evolving with the </p>
<p>mercy of time.....</p>
<p> </p>
<p>A Black Diamond, perfectly cut through the sharp edge of realities</p>
<p>rhyme.......</p>
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  1. 12 years ago
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I think all women can relate to this *snap snap*
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  1. 12 years ago
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This is very deep and needs to be broken down one segment at a time in discussion. Can't wait to see how you follow this your first post *snap snap snap snap*

Thank you
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  1. 12 years ago
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I like the sounds of this poem and the smooth way each line moves to the next. I enjoyed reading it.
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  1. 12 years ago
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Thank you Envy Red! *smiling*
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  1. 12 years ago
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Thank you so very much Shane!
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  1. 12 years ago
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Thank you very much Salvatore!
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